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Lost in Your Blue Eyes

I love it when you look at me,

I love it because, I get lost in your blue eyes,

They make me speechless, and blush......

They make my bones relax and make me not so stressed,

They look like two beautiful deep blue ocean colored eyes,
On the perfect, and cutest face :) ;)

I cannot stop looking at them,
When I see them,

They paralyze my ENTIRE body,

I don't blink, once I'm paralyzed, I do not move an inch,
Nope not at all,

Until you hug & kiss me,
Then you tell me to snap out of it,


Then you tell me you love me,

Then, I'll tell you the same thing.........

<3 .........I love you........... <3



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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 10:35 am:
Easy to read and understand.  The faces and text hearts (<3) were different from most poetry.  I liked it.
 
PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 7:16 pm :
Thanks, alot! Is there anything you would like me to read, of yours?
 
thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 5:46 am :
i could coonect  with what you said, because its a straightforward, honest piece. good work. but i suppose, if you mean serious poetry you should refrain from using emoticons :)
 
PandaBearLouise15 replied...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 12:39 pm :
Thanks!!!! :)
 
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