Falling Apart

Everyday,
I lose more sense,
Of who I am.
I search frantically,
But I am slipping.
The harder I try,
The more difficult it becomes.
I cannot sit back,
And do nothing,
I am falling apart.





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lordfarquad said...
Feb. 17, 2014 at 9:23 pm
LEL HA GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
 
MissLizzieGirl replied...
Feb. 18, 2014 at 6:51 pm
Grow up!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Rebel_without_a_cause said...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 8:30 pm
simple, short, and sweet. i like it :)
 
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 2:54 pm
That was very interesting. I like how you explain the steps that you took, and then you end very strongly. 
 
DeanDavis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 4:22 pm
Thanks, I appreciate you commenting on so many of my poems.
 
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 10:59 pm
Sure thing!
 
KimKendrick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 10:15 am
Could you look at my poems Oxygen and Books? I want to know what you think, they got Editor's Choice, and I have only been on this site for a week, so I'm excited!
 
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 6:56 pm
Of course!
 
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