Alone

When I am alone,
I am tortured by thoughts,
Of who I am,
Who I am not,
And who I should be.
When I am with others I am protected,
From the daggers that pierce my soul,
Daggers that are in the hands of my thoughts,
Without which I would be nothing.





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lordfarquad said...
Feb. 17, 2014 at 9:22 pm
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whitehouseolivia said...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 5:08 pm
i absolutely love it! :) great job! on to read some more :)
 
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 3:00 pm
I love the theme of inner turmoil that stream  through this poem. It is short but describes so much. 
 
KimKendrick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 9:20 pm
Thank you. Sometimes I feel like nobody cares, so I appreciate your comments.
 
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 4:37 pm
Your welcome! I love reading any poetry so if you postit in one of my forums I would be glad to comment on anything else!
 
KimKendrick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 5:48 pm
YAY!!!!!!!!!
 
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