Black, Dead Dove

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You hide behind a mask of "love"
With a hug & kiss that seems so real.
So were these rumors that they said,
A big huge deal, written in red?

So if these things said in secret
Were bigger than they ever seemed
What is there worth keeping
What is there with you and me

Are these smiles you beam at me
The longing glances you throw at me
Are these signs of real true love
Or just another black dead dove





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Abeera said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 2:30 am
love can never be fake and if it is,then it's not wothy of calling love...beautiful
 
Abeera said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 2:25 am
a true love find its way by its own...wonderful...
 
Zoya_Khan said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 11:59 am
I Just Love It!!! A.M.A.Z.I.N.G :) :) :)
 
sadesdd said...
Dec. 25, 2012 at 8:35 pm
Oh my gosh! I totally agree with the original part! It was so cool & it gave me goosebumps! I like poems with a kind of cold twist, and this was the bomb!
 
AhtmahKhalsa said...
Dec. 25, 2012 at 3:51 pm
Nice one bro :)
 
Shesavy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 24, 2012 at 1:47 pm
I love how you compare fake love to the black dead dove. That is origianal and I just love it.
 
DarkEyes replied...
Dec. 25, 2012 at 4:50 pm
Agreed :):)
 
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