Black, Dead Dove

December 21, 2012
By ZacharyCrank SILVER, Winchester, Kentucky
ZacharyCrank SILVER, Winchester, Kentucky
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You hide behind a mask of "love"
With a hug & kiss that seems so real.
So were these rumors that they said,
A big huge deal, written in red?

So if these things said in secret
Were bigger than they ever seemed
What is there worth keeping
What is there with you and me

Are these smiles you beam at me
The longing glances you throw at me
Are these signs of real true love
Or just another black dead dove


The author's comments:
Love can be real, but don't be led on. Find a way to prove the truth.

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Abeera said...
on Dec. 27 2012 at 2:30 am
Abeera, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
زندگی تیرے تعاقب میں لوگ ۔
اتنا چلتے ہیں کہ مر جاتے ہیں ۔

love can never be fake and if it is,then it's not wothy of calling love...beautiful

Abeera said...
on Dec. 27 2012 at 2:25 am
Abeera, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
زندگی تیرے تعاقب میں لوگ ۔
اتنا چلتے ہیں کہ مر جاتے ہیں ۔

a true love find its way by its own...wonderful...

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 11:59 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

I Just Love It!!! A.M.A.Z.I.N.G :) :) :)

on Dec. 25 2012 at 8:35 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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Oh my gosh! I totally agree with the original part! It was so cool & it gave me goosebumps! I like poems with a kind of cold twist, and this was the bomb!

on Dec. 25 2012 at 4:50 pm
AlwaysAntlers SILVER, Kingsport, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
“Don't forget - no one else sees the world the way you do, so no one else can tell the stories that you have to tell.”
― Charles de Lint, (from his book,The Blue Girl)

Agreed :):)

on Dec. 25 2012 at 3:51 pm
AhtmahKhalsa DIAMOND, Espanola, New Mexico
54 articles 1 photo 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
''Be Formless, Shapless, Like Water...When you put water in the cup, you become the cup, when you put water in the teapot, you become the teapot, be water my friend...'' -Bruce Lee

''The Only enemy we have to fight is ourselves''-Morihei Ueshiba

Nice one bro :)

Shesavy SILVER said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 1:47 pm
Shesavy SILVER, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
We accept the love we think we deserve

I love how you compare fake love to the black dead dove. That is origianal and I just love it.


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