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Combustion

December 18, 2012
By fractalateddreamwaves BRONZE, Fairhaven, Massachusetts
fractalateddreamwaves BRONZE, Fairhaven, Massachusetts
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it was 3:33 in the morning
our room was dark and without light
I peered through the blinds

it was snowing outside
but I was burning inside
as I gazed upon the scene before me I started to remember

our matchbox forms
so packed
so tight

our contents volatile
always ready to ignite
under passion's slightest strike

yet still i did
on bended knee
propose to thee with plastic ring

what a foolish thing
to have been so frugal
to have built our love on something so fragile

to have forged our bond with something
that melts
under phosphorus's light

our love a forever malformed plastic specter


The author's comments:
A friend of mine told me how a boy planned to propose to them with a plastic ring and something just clicked in my head where I began thinking about the properties of plastic and the poetics of a plastic ring. Then later I was lying in the darkness and thinking about matchbox people always capable of making there own light even in the thickest darkness. I twisted my original thinking about matchbox people to go with the poem.

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on Dec. 30 2012 at 10:34 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Congrats on the Editors' Choice Award! I can tell that you're on the right track. This poem is really unique, and every time I reread it, I find something new to contemplate. Fantastic job! I'll be more than happy to take a look at some of your other work when it is posted ! (: