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Friend

December 20, 2012
By Emma-Riley PLATINUM, No, Other
Emma-Riley PLATINUM, No, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Take my hand i give it to you, now you own me all i am, you said you would never leave me, i believe you, i believe..."
-Flyleaf


close your eyes
feel the rain
count to ten
don't go insane

breathe in slowly
listen to your heart
don't let go
don't fall apart

i see you
i know you suffer
i'll hold your hand
won't let you go under

close your eyes
count to ten don't let go
i am your friend



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on Jan. 18 2013 at 8:46 pm
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.”
"Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you."
-Ernest Hemingway

wow, beautiful. So simple and so elegant. so much emotion packed into one little poem-I can totally relate. Really wonderful job

on Jan. 18 2013 at 8:01 pm
Emma-Riley PLATINUM, No, Other
44 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take my hand i give it to you, now you own me all i am, you said you would never leave me, i believe you, i believe..."
-Flyleaf

thank you so much, both of you!!! your feedback is amazing!

on Jan. 18 2013 at 7:10 pm
Homestuck_Nerd, Efland, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
stand for what you want, even if that means standing alone.
-Andy Biersack, lead singer from Black Veil Brides

this is a really encuraging poem here, one of your happier ones. your writing is perfect, dont let anyone tell you different. if you can inprove, you have oficially blown my mind.,

on Jan. 18 2013 at 2:19 pm
BeccyFxx BRONZE, Harrogate, Other
2 articles 2 photos 21 comments
Wow! This is by far one of the cutest things I have ever read:) I love it! Not sure if you can inprove on it much!:D