Just She

December 17, 2012
By BlueFirefly BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
BlueFirefly BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Make new friends but don't forget the old, for one is silver and the other gold!


Her cruel face,
Her tender laugh,
Her soft slashes
On my heart.

Her warm eyes,
Her passionless face,
Her sour smile
Makes my heart race.

Her livid glare,
Her diluted love,
Her strong beliefs
From above.

Her harsh tears,
That intermingle with mine,
Her sarky comments
Have crossed the line

I no longer hear
Her anguished plea,
I don't know her name
Just 'She'


The author's comments:
I've always had a bit of a rocky friendship with one of my friends - sometimes she's great, sometimes I feel she's hurt me and like I've lost lost her.
That's what inspired this poem. Hope you like it :)

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on Jan. 25 2013 at 5:08 pm
BlueFirefly BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Make new friends but don't forget the old, for one is silver and the other gold!

hey thanks! :)

on Dec. 28 2012 at 12:54 pm
BlueFirefly BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make new friends but don't forget the old, for one is silver and the other gold!

thank you!  Much appreciated :D

SICKSPEED said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 12:51 pm
This was great! I love short poems and i loved the suspense!Keep going:)

on Dec. 28 2012 at 12:47 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

Awww this was amazing and i love the feelings u put into it that made it great  

SICKSPEED said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 12:46 pm
Wow it was good! I like short poems and yeah the suspense was good!


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