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Her cruel face,
Her tender laugh,
Her soft slashes
On my heart.

Her warm eyes,
Her passionless face,
Her sour smile
Makes my heart race.

Her livid glare,
Her diluted love,
Her strong beliefs
From above.

Her harsh tears,
That intermingle with mine,
Her sarky comments
Have crossed the line

I no longer hear
Her anguished plea,
I don't know her name
Just 'She'




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SICKSPEED said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 12:51 pm:
This was great! I love short poems and i loved the suspense!Keep going:)
 
BlueFirefly replied...
Jan. 25 at 5:08 pm :
hey thanks! :)
 
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Dec. 28, 2012 at 12:47 pm:
Awww this was amazing and i love the feelings u put into it that made it great  
 
BlueFirefly replied...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 12:54 pm :
thank you!  Much appreciated :D
 
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SICKSPEED said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 12:46 pm:
Wow it was good! I like short poems and yeah the suspense was good!
 
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