Person Behing the Mirror

December 14, 2012
By TrekkieFangirlForLife SILVER, Oceanside, California
TrekkieFangirlForLife SILVER, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
If your not pretty, your beautiful. if ur not beautiful, ur goregous, If ur not gorgeous, u have an unearthly beauty


What if a mirror to you
Was a window to another?
Regardless of gender
Or that it could be your brother

How would you feel?

They’ve watched since forever
But with a pain in their heart
Sometimes caring what they see
But wishing to be a part

How would you feel?

They try pounding on it
Though you never hear a sound
Hoping to break it
Only to fall to the ground

How would you feel?

Not the tiniest of cracks
As you live the life they wish they had
Though much was taken out on it
Even the things that made you sad

How would you feel?

They’ve seen you laugh
Seen the times that you’ve cried
Yet listened to your every word
As you contemplated suicide

Write a backwards message on your mirror
To show that you care
Nothing all that fancy
Just “thanks for being there”



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on Jan. 19 2013 at 10:37 am
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

This is really cool :3 Not sure on the first paragraph but I love the message <3

on Jan. 11 2013 at 1:08 pm
PoeticAsian BRONZE, Cordele, Georgia
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This is amazing! i love the emotions and creativity in it

on Jan. 9 2013 at 1:18 pm
huntinforwords, Slough, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
'If we're all chasing eachothers tails , who wins?'

Wow i love how you said how would you feel after every verse! Ur really good And CARRY ON FROM SICKSPEEDDDDDD P.S Now thats what i call sick ;)

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:13 pm
SpeaksThroughScreams, Missouri City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Life is difficult, It's the writing that is easy.

this is beautiful! i love. keep writing!

on Jan. 3 2013 at 4:40 pm
Wordfreak1 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"F*ck you." - Feli to this guy that made her mad.

Perfect!! Great poem and it relates to many people in thier daily lives! goog job! (my typos were not as bad as paddys) :P

on Jan. 3 2013 at 4:30 pm
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

Oh my lord, the typos in that were horrendous, sorry! *poem, *stanza, *thought-inducing, beautiful :P nice job!

on Jan. 3 2013 at 4:29 pm
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

Great pom! It's really thought inducing, and I love that in writing, The last stanze was my favorite part, so eautiful! Keep it up :)

on Jan. 3 2013 at 4:03 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
When it seems like there’s no one left to run to in this empty world you can come to me I’ll be your shooting star. You can tell me your dreams I can’t promise to make them come true, but I’ll be there to pick up the pieces of your broken heart if your dreams happen to fall through…Unknown

I love it!!!

minminty5 said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 1:54 pm
minminty5, Huntersville, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no telling how many miles you will have to run while chasing a dream"

loved it!! so deep <3

wille said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 1:54 pm
Its a really nice poem... beautifully written.


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