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Person Behing the Mirror

What if a mirror to you
Was a window to another?
Regardless of gender
Or that it could be your brother

How would you feel?

They’ve watched since forever
But with a pain in their heart
Sometimes caring what they see
But wishing to be a part

How would you feel?

They try pounding on it
Though you never hear a sound
Hoping to break it
Only to fall to the ground

How would you feel?

Not the tiniest of cracks
As you live the life they wish they had
Though much was taken out on it
Even the things that made you sad

How would you feel?

They’ve seen you laugh
Seen the times that you’ve cried
Yet listened to your every word
As you contemplated suicide

Write a backwards message on your mirror
To show that you care
Nothing all that fancy
Just “thanks for being there”



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LinkinPark12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19 at 10:37 am:
This is really cool :3 Not sure on the first paragraph but I love the message <3
 
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PoeticAsian said...
Jan. 11 at 1:08 pm:
This is amazing! i love the emotions and creativity in it
 
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SICKSPEED said...
Jan. 9 at 1:18 pm:
Wow i love how you said how would you feel after every verse! Ur really good And CARRY ON FROM SICKSPEEDDDDDD P.S Now thats what i call sick ;)
 
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SpeaksThroughScreams said...
Jan. 7 at 1:13 pm:
this is beautiful! i love. keep writing!
 
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WORDYThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 4:40 pm:
Perfect!! Great poem and it relates to many people in thier daily lives! goog job! (my typos were not as bad as paddys) :P
 
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705toofdaPThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 4:29 pm:
Great pom! It's really thought inducing, and I love that in writing, The last stanze was my favorite part, so eautiful! Keep it up :)
 
705toofdaPThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 3 at 4:30 pm :
Oh my lord, the typos in that were horrendous, sorry! *poem, *stanza, *thought-inducing, beautiful :P nice job!
 
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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 4:03 pm:
I love it!!!
 
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minminty5 said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 1:54 pm:
loved it!! so deep <3
 
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wille said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 1:54 pm:
Its a really nice poem... beautifully written.
 
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