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Serene orb, shrouded
by veils of cotton-candy fog
terrestrial secrets keeping vigil
with the whispers of the stars
Her face is pockmarked,
porous craters full of faults
yet she does not
judge beauty by another’s eyes
Her voice softly
caresses the earth,
her whispers scented
like gentle mid
summer nights
Nights swarms her like plagues,
yet still she is hope




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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 4:28 pm:
I didn't get it. I thought the imagery was stunning, but the last line was confusing :P
 
KatsKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 6:28 pm :
Thank you. Honestly, I don't get it either. I reread it, and yeah, the last line doesn't really make sense. I'm not really sure what I was thinking there .l.
 
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