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How could You

November 26, 2012
By Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy


Each day is slow, I have nowhere to hide
My heart is torn, bleeding from the inside
It’s hard to think, how could this happen to me?
Now I’m stuck in a world of messed up reality
shoulddn’t have to hide away, never should hide your soul
So mixed up in this life of mine
Trying so hard to pass the time
Sitting alone in the corner, watching the world pass me by
I can do nothing but think about you…… and cry
Forgetting about you seems to be the impossible
Trying to get through these challenges, overcoming each and every obstacle
Having to restrain myself from running back to you
It’s a poison coursing through me, my thoughts
Sometimes, it even makes me want to scream
Passing me by, like a sad lonely stream
Wishing that this was only a dream
I thought we were going to make it
But then someone else came and took my bit
Oh, how I want to hold your hand
And dance with you like the world will never end
In the beginning you were the glue that held us together
Now you’re the hands ripping my heart apart
How can you live with yourself after what you have done?



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on Dec. 20 2012 at 6:42 pm
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

thank's so much for all the great feedback

on Dec. 18 2012 at 12:12 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

wow, i've loved yo poems! you truly really good at this!

Maggzs BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 11:07 am
Maggzs BRONZE, CHICAGO, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
its better to be alone that way no one can hurt you.

very good poem. can relate  

on Dec. 12 2012 at 7:52 am
Sonett-Verfasser BRONZE, Pflugerville, Texas
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a few words to say "I love you" but it takes a lifetime to show it

All around, great poem. This is a very personal poem I can tell, but its constructed and written in a way that anyone could relate to it. And that takes some core talent. Thank you for sharing your talent with us Poetman, great job and keep writing.