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Ocean of Life

Life is a luxury liner
It has the upperclass
It has the lowerclass
You can do pretty much whatever you want
For the asking price
You have to get on board
Take your chances
Let loose and have some fun
Set your sights on the horizon



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so_joy said...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 10:50 am
Good analogy! Great job! I love it. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot:) Thanks!
 
FauxedTea said...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 11:49 pm
Very simple, though written with power. I like it!
 
Blah_Baby said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 2:58 pm
Outstanding!! Luv Luv Luuuuuvvvvvvv It ! You Got a Gift.
 
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