My Bestfriend

November 27, 2012
By Ala Elfahal SILVER, Matthews, North Carolina
Ala Elfahal SILVER, Matthews, North Carolina
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I thought she was my best friend
The best I ever had
We told each other every thing
The day I knew the truth
I was shocked to learn it was all a lie
It was sad but yet true
We were not best friends anymore or like sisters
We use to call each other best friend
But now I know we are far apart
Though we see each other every day
We were talking less and less
I had a broken heart
She had friends so did I
But they were not a best friend
Inside me I felt lonely and sad
Every night I prayed to god
For us to be best friends again
And for her to know how much she means to me



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on Oct. 14 2014 at 6:40 pm
Ala Elfahal SILVER, Matthews, North Carolina
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Thank you everyone! I think I will start writing again

jennaluvu said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 7:31 pm
amazing just fab (fabulous)

timmyyah said...
on Jan. 31 2013 at 4:54 pm
     It sounds exactly like speech!  Your writing is very powerful and understandable, but astoundingly maintains a poetic complexity and feel.     

jennaluvu said...
on Jan. 30 2013 at 5:40 pm
It sounds exactly like speech!  Your writing is very powerful and understandable, but astoundingly maintains a poetic complexity and feel.

Cyrus said...
on Jan. 30 2013 at 5:38 pm
was truly touched and moved by the words and images placed in my head. You have talent and each lined swayed beautifully. I was about to stop reading because it was long, but I couldn't I had to know what happened. Good work!  

jennaluvu said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 8:06 pm
do you have any more

timmyyah said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 8:04 pm
WOW this poem jus blew my mind. That was awesome

on Jan. 29 2013 at 8:02 pm
This was such an awesome piece that you wrote!!! Do you have any others?

Dima said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 7:57 pm
AWSOME GIRL KEEP ON GOING

MoMo said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 5:13 pm
awsome poem ala  

kudo said...
on Jan. 24 2013 at 7:26 pm
awsome poem man  

kudo said...
on Jan. 23 2013 at 7:33 pm
awsome poem

on Jan. 18 2013 at 8:30 pm
Ala Elfahal SILVER, Matthews, North Carolina
5 articles 1 photo 8 comments
i just hope she is not mad at me for not saying goodbye  

conan dolye said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 8:01 pm
with a poets mind and heart  

miley said...
on Dec. 10 2012 at 10:57 pm
Does your bestfriend ever come to be your sister that lives somewhere else

on Dec. 7 2012 at 9:58 pm
Your poem is very meaningful senative but serios.You sticked to one subject with no spelling or grammical mistakes.Great job you have a future in this as i said.




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