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I thought she was my best friend
The best I ever had
We told each other every thing
The day I knew the truth
I was shocked to learn it was all a lie
It was sad but yet true
We were not best friends anymore or like sisters
We use to call each other best friend
But now I know we are far apart
Though we see each other every day
We were talking less and less
I had a broken heart
She had friends so did I
But they were not a best friend
Inside me I felt lonely and sad
Every night I prayed to god
For us to be best friends again
And for her to know how much she means to me



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Ala E. said...
today at 6:40 pm:
Thank you everyone! I think I will start writing again
 
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jennaluvu said...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 7:31 pm:
amazing just fab (fabulous)
 
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timmyyah said...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 4:54 pm:
     It sounds exactly like speech!  Your writing is very powerful and understandable, but astoundingly maintains a poetic complexity and feel.     
 
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jennaluvu said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 5:40 pm:
It sounds exactly like speech!  Your writing is very powerful and understandable, but astoundingly maintains a poetic complexity and feel.
 
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Cyrus said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 5:38 pm:
was truly touched and moved by the words and images placed in my head. You have talent and each lined swayed beautifully. I was about to stop reading because it was long, but I couldn't I had to know what happened. Good work!  
 
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jennaluvu said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 8:06 pm:
do you have any more
 
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timmyyah said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 8:04 pm:
WOW this poem jus blew my mind. That was awesome
 
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creativwriter2020 said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 8:02 pm:
This was such an awesome piece that you wrote!!! Do you have any others?
 
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Dima said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 7:57 pm:
AWSOME GIRL KEEP ON GOING
 
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MoMo said...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 5:13 pm:
awsome poem ala  
 
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kudo said...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 7:26 pm:
awsome poem man  
 
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kudo said...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 7:33 pm:
awsome poem
 
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Ala E. said...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 8:30 pm:
i just hope she is not mad at me for not saying goodbye  
 
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conan dolye said...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 8:01 pm:
with a poets mind and heart  
 
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miley said...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 10:57 pm:
Does your bestfriend ever come to be your sister that lives somewhere else
 
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sally sunshine said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 9:58 pm:
Your poem is very meaningful senative but serios.You sticked to one subject with no spelling or grammical mistakes.Great job you have a future in this as i said.
 
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