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The Way You Were This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I look beside me in the chair you once sat
Instead of you, dust collects on the tattered upholstery
One empty tea cup still sits at the side
I laugh to myself because I can almost see you sitting there, Sudoku in one hand, mine in the other
I miss the smell of your hair after a perm
The way you would trot through the door and look in the shattered old mirror
you've had since you were a girl
You were never quite happy with the way your silver locks lay
You were beautiful nonetheless
I miss you, darling.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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AugustSummerFlingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 11:50 am
beautiful... Everybody wants true love and such a sweet poem..
 
scenesoccerqueen said...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 9:59 pm
This is great! Great imagery and it was well written!:)
 
BlackNether12 said...
Jan. 26, 2013 at 4:20 pm
Can see why it got Editors Choice >
 
ScarlettRose390 said...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 1:06 pm
Really emotional, though I'd capitolize the I's.
 
cyndielouwho said...
Dec. 16, 2012 at 9:33 am
Om my gosh. I felt this deep in my heart.
 
Deamer_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 4:15 pm
Lovely! I like it.
 
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