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land of autumn

The fall eve paints the late summer’s leaves,
Reds and brown from yellows and greens,
The grass turns to brush,
The wind tells her to hush,
But she disobeys,
And continues her journey through the land of autumn,
Crunching through the color, death, and decay



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WickedWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 4:39 pm:
I like it. Very discriptive. Only comment is you had two lines that rhymed nd the poem itself did not. Other then that love the imegry! keep writing!
 
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Something16This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 1:36 pm:
I love this. Really cool!
 
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