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the beautiful younge woman

October 29, 2012
By Anonymous

The most beautiful girl,
a very proper pearl
crazy as she was
amazing as can be
she reminded me of a rose bunch



more beautiful as a baby at mothers first sight
everyday or time I cried
she would hold me tightly as tight as a constructor




she would say
"I love you so much"
I fill so warm inside
I would hug her back and say
"I love you so much, please oh please stay as perfect as can be
because you know I love you so much please for me stay as perfect as can be"


The author's comments:
the piece is about my best friend. there were times and she was the only one that I could tell and/or see she would helped me and about the very strong feelings for her

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on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:51 pm
Mrs.McPandaOtterPants, New York City, New York
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Good, but not great. It was okay, a little hard to follow and there were a few spelling/grammar problems. You'll get there! Keep trying! Good work!