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the beautiful younge woman

By , Midland, TX
The most beautiful girl,
a very proper pearl
crazy as she was
amazing as can be
she reminded me of a rose bunch



more beautiful as a baby at mothers first sight
everyday or time I cried
she would hold me tightly as tight as a constructor




she would say
"I love you so much"
I fill so warm inside
I would hug her back and say
"I love you so much, please oh please stay as perfect as can be
because you know I love you so much please for me stay as perfect as can be"



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Mrs.McPandaOtterPants said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:51 pm:
Good, but not great. It was okay, a little hard to follow and there were a few spelling/grammar problems. You'll get there! Keep trying! Good work!
 
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