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Exultant, joyful times are a bar of chocolate.
It melts with relishing prospects, dreams
And sweet exhilaration, but
Is a mere illusion, vanished
When we swallow it, leaving
Only nostalgia and ache.
But everyone has to swallow their piece,
And patiently wait till they save enough,
With time, to afford another bar.



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ZozeyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 16 at 4:40 pm:
I liked it, it had that whole rthym to it like the below comment said, its describes happiness perfectly... and chocolate. I agree with your note, chocolate goes way too fast! anyway, good writing keep it up!
 
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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 1:33 pm:
That so truly describes happiness.... comes and goes...then comes again.. :P I like on the whole...
 
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