Ohana

November 6, 2012
By TheBlackCrow901 SILVER, Chatham, Illinois
TheBlackCrow901 SILVER, Chatham, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Let this be your honour: always love more than you are loved and never to be second in this."


Ohana means family
And family means no ones left behind
Ohana means sharing
Whether it be riches or treasures of the mind
A simple complexity
Only love can make
You know you’ve found it
When separated there is an ache
It is something you grow
Not stumble upon or find
Ohana means family
And family means no one left behind


The author's comments:
I wrote this for my Grandma.

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KymHollow_13 said...
on Feb. 22 2013 at 1:17 pm
KymHollow_13, Hahira, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up no matter how bad the living nightmare gets"

Ohana was truly interesting and is a poem that touches the heart. The way went into detail on the meaning of the word was awesome

KymHollow_13 said...
on Feb. 22 2013 at 1:14 pm
KymHollow_13, Hahira, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up no matter how bad the living nightmare gets"

Ohana was very interesting. The way you put a handle to the meaning of the word truly touches the heart.

Monicaa GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 11:49 am
Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
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I Love How It Rhymes At Times And I Love The "Ohana Means Family And Family Means No Ones Left Behind."   Great Job :)

OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 13 2012 at 3:11 pm
I like the simplicity of the poem it keeps things simple and brings a warm feeling to the heart. Your message comes across with no confusion ( I like alot). I'd appreciate it if you go to my profile and evaulate my work as well but it's your choice :)


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