Hurt No More

By vbronk, Winona, MN

I'm sitting in my room,
thinking of all that I have done to you.
I have hurt you,
and you have hurt me.
So what now, we are even?
I don't want to hurt anymore.
So please just can we go back to normal?
Actually it will never be the same,
EVER AGAIN!!!!!

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Higgs.A said...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 12:50 pm:

"So please just can we go back to normal?"<-------- this line is my favorite. I always think these words to myself.

vbronk replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 11:10 am :

yes it is a very strong line!!! all of my writings have a very strong line in there somewhere that relates 2 someone somehow!

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Higgs.A said...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 12:49 pm:

This line -"So please just can we go back to normal?"- is my favorite. I wish that i could go back to normal.

vbronk replied...
Jan. 2 at 2:24 pm :

ahh well you just have to believe that you can go back to normal. I did and I was very surprised.