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Feet dangle inches above
Tantalizingly taunting …
They strive to graze the bicycle’s pedals,
Just as my hands strive to emerge
From the lemon yellow dress
You handed down to me.
My slow growth is too far behind
Your quick judgment,
Constantly comparing a hazy reflection
To that black and white photograph
You have framed in the hallway.
Maybe someday the dress will fit.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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secrets said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 9:36 pm:
I love this poem it makes me think and it has meaning. The wring style is great and i like that u expressed that u willl " fit the yellow dress someday."
 
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georgiab said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 9:19 pm:
this is really sincere, just what i needed to hear. thanks :)
 
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aaliona said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 9:08 pm:
This makes me think about my little sister.
 
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PerfectMGymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 7:32 pm:
this was really good and very relatable!! :)
 
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Maximum.Ride This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 9:34 am:
I loved this so much because I feel like that with my older sister. :) I could really see the image right there in my head... AMAZING!!!! <3
 
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Adrienne34 said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 11:26 pm:
Amazing <3
 
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jocelyn123 said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 9:50 pm:
its REALLY GOOD! i have gained a new perspective of my siblings thanks to you:) <3
 
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softball said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:48 pm:
this was an amazing poem u did an awesome job writing it
 
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DaBritt3 said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 4:19 pm:
This is beautiful. I love it.
 
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to.hold.the.sun This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 3:19 pm:
I am an older sister, and this was an interesting new perspective. Great emotion. Beautiful. Keep writing!
 
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VolcanicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 1:56 pm:
BEAUTIFUL. <3
 
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alekstymura said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 1:18 pm:
This poem is amazing. good JOB :)
 
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Blochberger said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 7:34 am:
Amazing poem, I really enjoyed it!
 
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allicool :P said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 7:17 am:
i think it was a good poem and that you did a grate job at writing it :D
 
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mcnwritingsoul said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:27 am:
wow.....thats good. can someone of you PLZZZ comment on my poems?? im young, and STARVING for feedback!!!
 
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anne.Brooke said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 1:46 am:
It feels sad to be compared to anyone else...
 
mcnwritingsoul replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:28 am :

hi anna,

would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!

 
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Bianca S. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:34 pm:
Nice :) What is this about?
 
Shanay W. replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 8:44 pm :
this is nice very wonderfull keep up the good work -love shanay
 
mcnwritingsoul replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:29 am :

hi shanay and bianca,

would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!

 
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