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Watching the sun dissolving

in the crimson water

And bright clouds with red outlines

sailing in the crimson ocean of the sky

My eyes blurred as a drop of

salty water traced its way

Along my cheek and

landed on a daisy leaf

And I realized that

I am completely broken.



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Zoya_Khan said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 10:58 am
This is nice but needs improvement :) :) :)
 
VelaneDeBeaute This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 11:27 pm
A heart-break expressed emotionally! Absolutely lovable. 4/5 stars! (: 
 
Fizza replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 9:53 am
Thank you. :)
 
VelaneDeBeaute This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 2:38 pm
You're very welcome! (: 
Check my work too! :D 
 
Jalpari replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 11:01 pm
:) okay.
 
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