My Detailed Feelings

October 19, 2012
By Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better


My temperature is rising.
My heart is rumbling.
My lips are mumbling.
Your name!
Oh your name pure and sweet.
What is a name but a rose just as sweet.
Feelings.
Of loneliness without your gentle touch.
You are my drug of which is never to much.
Scents, sweet and long.
My glimmering rose.
But I utter a sure cry for help.
For i miss you as you leave and go.
And without you I am not.
You are my Half.
The whole to my heart.
And I wish we never depart


The author's comments:
This one ain't as good i wrote it in five minutes when i was in the car so its kinda bad.And in line six i quoted Shakephere

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