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My Evil Twin

I have an evil twin
That has an evil heart
Full of evil things
He was evil from the start

EVIL is his first name
DARKNESS is his last
Everything he touches
Just breaks like fragile glass

He laughs at death
He stares it in the face
The devil is his brother
My twin is a walking disgrace

He lives his life to the fullest
Evil, wild and free
You might not know who he is
But my evil twin is me



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TeedybearThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 22, 2013 at 1:59 pm:
Nice poem, but i dont believe that ur evil :)
 
THE-DUBSTEP-MOVEMENT replied...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 12:27 pm :
thanx baby lol
 
AnushAndMalachiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 8:19 pm :
Np baby I love u honey <3
 
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ShadowpomgurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 12:45 pm:
ooohh! i love it! 5/5
 
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chrisfree.fireboltsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 11:30 am:
Wow, what a powerful conclusion to the poem "My evil twin is me." Nice imagery and a very steady rhyme scheme. Keep writing!
 
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LinkinPark12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 1:40 pm:
That's really good! Punctuation needed though:) Nice style:)
 
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