Prison within myself

October 10, 2012
By Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better


Tick! Tock!
The monocholy sound of the clock.
And how I wish for me.
To leave a prison!
A prison of myself.
My feelings suppressed
And all hope lost with the rest. For myself is lost in pain and sorrow.
Now i can barley make it till tomorrow.
I have no feelings
No way to live.
For i dont show who i truely am.
But a man is who i am.
One with no feelings.
One with no yang.
One man with no reason to live.


The author's comments:
this poem is about how people are scared to show their own self in school and how it tears them apart.

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Vandy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:34 pm
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better

i would love for people to comment on here  

angel said...
on Nov. 3 2012 at 7:32 am
oh cool thats so great i would love to read your poems and as far as you beung a guy writing poems i think that is cool i only know a lot of girls who weite poems so thanks i now have a guy who likes to write poems :)  

Vandy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 11:26 am
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better

lol ik  

on Oct. 23 2012 at 11:20 am
Avery1817 BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Ive failed over and over again in my life.... and thats why i suceed
-MJ

GREAT JOB BRO!! lol even tho I saw u type it its beast! nice work "vandy"

Vandy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 11:15 am
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better

well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them

Vandy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 11:15 am
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better

well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them

Vandy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 11:15 am
Vandy BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country is what Country do, Born in the south Die in the south, Practice doesnt make perfect it makes better

well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them

on Oct. 12 2012 at 2:18 pm
angel337 BRONZE, Nyc, New York
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treat people the way wanted to be treated

this poem is really pretty and i love it its really nice   


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