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Tick! Tock!
The monocholy sound of the clock.
And how I wish for me.
To leave a prison!
A prison of myself.
My feelings suppressed
And all hope lost with the rest. For myself is lost in pain and sorrow.
Now i can barley make it till tomorrow.
I have no feelings
No way to live.
For i dont show who i truely am.
But a man is who i am.
One with no feelings.
One with no yang.
One man with no reason to live.



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Vandy said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 2:34 pm:
i would love for people to comment on here  
 
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angel said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 7:32 am:
oh cool thats so great i would love to read your poems and as far as you beung a guy writing poems i think that is cool i only know a lot of girls who weite poems so thanks i now have a guy who likes to write poems :)  
 
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Avery1817 said...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 11:20 am:
GREAT JOB BRO!! lol even tho I saw u type it its beast! nice work "vandy"
 
Vandy replied...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 11:26 am :
lol ik  
 
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angel337 said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:18 pm:
this poem is really pretty and i love it its really nice   
 
Vandy replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 11:15 am :
well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them
 
Vandy replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 11:15 am :
well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them
 
Vandy replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 11:15 am :
well thank you i have a hard time with feelings and how i show myself to other people, so i write poems but everyone says im not the kind of guy they see to write a poem. to night i have a poem that im going to post which will start like a series poem there is 5 i think to the series and i hope you wuld like to read them
 
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