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Sins in the Past

October 4, 2012
By VanessaNicole BRONZE, White Lake, Michigan
VanessaNicole BRONZE, White Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
" when i see you, its like Chritmas morning"


In the rearview mirror she can see
A life, a future that will be
A little girl with cat green eyes
If she's like daddy, she'll be wise
A laugh, a smile will last a while
All those memories will become so vile
Cuz she looked away for just a sec
Now their lives are a big huge wreck
We had to bury her deep down under
Every now and then we hear our girls thunder
I cry, I weep a thousand soft tears
Even after all these years
A life, a future that could have been
In the rearview mirror, she had sin



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on Dec. 5 2012 at 9:46 pm
VanessaNicole BRONZE, White Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
" when i see you, its like Chritmas morning"

awe thanks. it means a lot to know that someone finally read this poem and liked it :)

on Oct. 9 2012 at 8:26 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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Very moving. I had to keep re-reading it. It also flows so well. No jagged non fitted words, just one big touching poem.