Fighter

October 1, 2012
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Today I look at the mirror and I saw a different girl
I hasn't that cheerful and helpless girl
I've grown up and became a strong girl
Now the world can't hurt me more
He can't hurt me more
I am a different person
I am a better person
I am a fighter





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Blaque said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:50 am
It could be more specific because i don't know how to explain but it was right it shown how powerful you are and strong and independent.
 
Mish123 said...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 12:41 pm
Really nice poem. LOVE IT!!
 
BlueSunset said...
Oct. 10, 2012 at 7:30 am
Strong piece of work, I liked it very much! It would've been better if it was a bit longer however it is unique in its own way!
 
Caroll replied...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 12:39 pm
I agree with you  My next work will be more complete tis was just a experience Thanks
 
Caroll said...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:56 am
Thank you Newsiesfreak Your work rock
 
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 3:31 pm
cool poem! I liked it!
 
Caroll replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:50 am
THANKS HARRYPOTTER30!!! YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON, I REALLY LIKE YOU WORK
 
Newsiesfreak replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:54 am
powerful. love it.
 
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