Fighter

October 1, 2012
By Caroll BRONZE, Santiago Do Cacém, Other
Caroll BRONZE, Santiago Do Cacém, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Today I look at the mirror and I saw a different girl
I hasn't that cheerful and helpless girl
I've grown up and became a strong girl
Now the world can't hurt me more
He can't hurt me more
I am a different person
I am a better person
I am a fighter


The author's comments:
Sometimes the world is cruel and we should grow and fight

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Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:50 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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It could be more specific because i don't know how to explain but it was right it shown how powerful you are and strong and independent.

Mish123 SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 12:41 pm
Mish123 SILVER, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'Treat others the way you want to be treated'

Really nice poem. LOVE IT!!

Caroll BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 12:39 pm
Caroll BRONZE, Santiago Do Cacém, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments
I agree with you  My next work will be more complete tis was just a experience Thanks

on Oct. 10 2012 at 7:30 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Strong piece of work, I liked it very much! It would've been better if it was a bit longer however it is unique in its own way!

Caroll BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2012 at 11:56 am
Caroll BRONZE, Santiago Do Cacém, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments
Thank you Newsiesfreak Your work rock

on Oct. 9 2012 at 11:54 am
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
25 articles 1 photo 31 comments
powerful. love it.

Caroll BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2012 at 11:50 am
Caroll BRONZE, Santiago Do Cacém, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments
THANKS HARRYPOTTER30!!! YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON, I REALLY LIKE YOU WORK

on Oct. 7 2012 at 3:31 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

cool poem! I liked it!


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