Fighter

October 1, 2012

By Caroll, Santiago do Cacém, Portugal

Today I look at the mirror and I saw a different girl
I hasn't that cheerful and helpless girl
I've grown up and became a strong girl
Now the world can't hurt me more
He can't hurt me more
I am a different person
I am a better person
I am a fighter

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Blaque said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:50 am

It could be more specific because i don't know how to explain but it was right it shown how powerful you are and strong and independent.

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Mish123 said...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 12:41 pm

Really nice poem. LOVE IT!!

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BlueSunset said...
Oct. 10, 2012 at 7:30 am

Strong piece of work, I liked it very much! It would've been better if it was a bit longer however it is unique in its own way!

Caroll replied...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 12:39 pm

I agree with you My next work will be more complete tis was just a experience Thanks

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Caroll said...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:56 am

Thank you Newsiesfreak Your work rock

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HarryPotterLover30 said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 3:31 pm

cool poem! I liked it!

Caroll replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:50 am

THANKS HARRYPOTTER30!!! YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON, I REALLY LIKE YOU WORK

Newsiesfreak replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 11:54 am

powerful. love it.