Your Love

October 2, 2012
Your love is addicting
It drowns me and brings me back
It is like wine
It warms my body
And runs through my veins
Your love has turned me into You
Now I hope to show Your love
Through my life

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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 5:30 pm
I think you should say something along the lines of "it makes me drunk". I think taht would go really well with you saying wine. Just a thought. (:
Hannabug replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 5:07 pm
bulby545 said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 10:14 pm
awwww its nice  
Hannabug replied...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 10:16 pm
Thank you!
holyblondecheerleaderbatman said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 9:02 pm
Really simple and to the point but it really delivers teh message it was good
Hannabug replied...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 9:08 pm
FieryAngel replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 6:56 pm
wow this is amazing
Hannabug replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 7:00 pm
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