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Timeless Enemy

“I’ll do it later.”
“Maybe next time.”
“Cya later.”
Time: -Tick- -Tick
It lurks
It ticks
It creeps up at you at unexpected moments
It breathes
It shrieks
Be forewarned
Time waits for no one….



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MarieAntoinette2012This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 11:23 am
Hey, told you I'd check out some of your work, here I am! I like the poem, but I feel like you could elaborate and make it longer, because it's a really great concept. Over all, good job.
 
CelebrateDifferencesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 2, 2013 at 9:53 pm
Your right! it needs more depth. Thank you for your honest feedback!
 
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