She Cried

September 25, 2012
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and the words dripped from her mind
like blood from a vein
staining the paper before her
into a beautiful mess
of truth





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StarlitSunrise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 12:58 pm
  This is truly great! I really like the way you used the title.
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 5:06 pm
Oh my gosh I loved this poem!! It reminds me of one i wrote called "jump..." Will you read it? It's exactly the same style, where the title is part of the poem:)
 
wanderlustful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 1:51 am
I will! Thank you for commenting on so many of my pieces. I REALLY appreciate it
 
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