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She Cried

September 25, 2012
By schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
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schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
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"Stop acting so small. You are the universe in ecstatic motion." ~Rumi

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and the words dripped from her mind
like blood from a vein
staining the paper before her
into a beautiful mess
of truth

© Michael H., Mildford, CT

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StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 16 2013 at 12:58 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

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  This is truly great! I really like the way you used the title.
schuy PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 1:51 am
schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
33 articles 4 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop acting so small. You are the universe in ecstatic motion." ~Rumi

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I will! Thank you for commenting on so many of my pieces. I REALLY appreciate it
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 2 2013 at 5:06 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

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“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

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Oh my gosh I loved this poem!! It reminds me of one i wrote called "jump..." Will you read it? It's exactly the same style, where the title is part of the poem:)