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Goodbye, I Love You

September 1, 2012
By bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Everybody lies. -House

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Goodbye, I love you
that's what you said to me
as the colour of your
face was drained away
and replaced by white

Goodbye, I love you
as you slipped beneath
the waves, leaving me to
make for the shore alone

Goodbye, I love you
as your hand dropped
from mine
as your eyes dropped
from mine

Goodbye, I love you
as cold overtook your
body, causing me to
shiver

You died before
I could say
it back
So I'll say it now


Goodbye, I love you

© Ariel L., New York, NY

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