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My soldier protects me
Protects his country
Keeps us free
Loves me unconditionally
My soldier deserves respect
His support I won't neglect
His fight is the cause
My love is the effect
He is my hero
I could never let go
He is my soldier
I'll be with him forever




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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 5:08 pm:
This is great, I love it very much. You speak of the soldier very personally, as if he is your relative or someone very close to you. I enjoyed this, please write more. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
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bagley777 said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 9:14 pm:
I really like it. I think it's short and sweet, but says a lot at the same time. You are an amazing writer!(:
 
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TraceALittlePieceOfHeaven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 5:27 pm:
I think this is a good pre-set to a finished piece, but it does need some work. There are some good lines, like the cause and effect line, but most of it seems like it needs flushing out. Nice job either way.
 
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