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DREAMS

Dreams are wishes my heart makes.
Sometimes a few words with a lot meaning are all that it takes.
Sometimes the flower that blooms in me sends messages to broken hands.
But broken hands are just the start of a great writer.
A great writer has the power to
turn words into a message that's brighter.



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kseager2This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 9:25 am:
I really like this! The main message is really good! Just one thing to work on in the future: making all the lines a similar length so the poem flows better. :)
 
khassif replied...
Nov. 25, 2012 at 4:09 pm :
THANKYOU! I WILL TRY YOUR ADVICE MEANS ALOT TO ME  
 
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