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She is beautiful.

The society whispers.
Look at how skinny she is.

Replies the children.
See how much she is liked.

Shouts the population.
Why are you not like her?


Magazine screams.

Change your diet.

Says the fridge.
Get better clothes.

Sing the closet.
Become skinny.

The mirror answers.

Look at her.

The hallways creaks.
She's so pretty.

A fat girl stares.
What's your number?

Boys asks in class.

Why are you in here?

Puzzles the toilet.
Never see you anymore.

Wonders the camera.
Where are you?


asked the scale.
Are you seeing your goal?


Riddles the mirror.

You need Help.

Family members whispers.
You're in so much pain.

The journal confesses.
You know you want it.

Teases the cake.
You're already not here.

Haunts the noose



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LOLOU said...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 1:16 pm:
well the issue u have presented is really good and common nowadays ! so true for bad luck anyway its a very nice piece especially the thing about dialloge...good work
 
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pandagirl312 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 8:40 am:
I love the use of personification used in this piece. Truly sensational. Great jo! :)
 
staffy replied...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 4:40 pm :
Thank you, Yeah it's a new way of presenting personification. 
 
pandagirl312 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 5:49 pm :
*job. And you're welcome. :)
 
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EternalMadness said...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 2:11 am:
This is amazing.
 
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