Hating Loving You

August 23, 2012
By Sarah-ann BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
Sarah-ann BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
1 Peter 3:3: Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as elaborate hairstyles and the wearing of gold jewelry or fine clothes.

Love, its easy to fall into.
Sometimes too easy.
You see, I was in it now I’m out,
It built me up then tore me down.
Sometimes all hope seems to be lost.
I keep on loving though,
It’s like I’m putting on this show
That’s leaving me with no way out.
its hard to find the strength to shout
When you’re so wounded on the inside
It transfers to the outside.
Time heals all wounds,
but this one is so deep it will only heal halfway.
This pain that he caused me is here to stay.
I hate that I think like this too,
but part of me will always love you.

The author's comments:
This is a piece I wrote about my ex-boyfriend right after we had broken up.

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Roper GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2012 at 8:30 pm
Roper GOLD, Krum, Texas
17 articles 11 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What a boy can do, A girl can do better"

Amazing! Especially the last lines!

on Aug. 25 2012 at 8:30 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

Beautifully done :) I especially like the last few lines!


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