I Promised

Before I slept,
I wished that I would not
wake up
again.
But then I dreamt
of you, and I was struck
with my promise
to not think like that again.





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taylortea said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 2:27 pm
I actually love this piece very much. I think the simplicity is spot on and it has a beautiful purpose. Great job!
 
PrincessLena replied...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 3:34 pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)
 
TheGirlWhoAteTheWorld said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 10:49 am
I feel like these needs to be longer than it is - you are off to a good start but it just stops. Maybe add some more.. :)
 
PrincessLena replied...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 3:35 pm
Okay, thank you for the feedback! I'll definitely try to get more there and add onto the poem. A lot mine are too short, so thank you for letting me know about this one :)
 
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