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Burning

August 14, 2012
By Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.


I try not to think
And i try not to feel
The fire burning through my chest.

It singes the edges
Of a once whole heart,
Becoming jagged and hallow.

The only thing keeping me alive
Is a rage that isn't visible on the outside
But consumes the inner.

I am powered by this feeling
But must shade my eyes
A vacant gray.

For no one can see me wallow in this sorrow
And no one must notice my light
That has been burnt out
By you.



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Trees BRONZE said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 8:09 pm
Trees BRONZE, Billings, Montana
3 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody wants to go to heaven, but nobody wants to die. How is that?

Beautiful!  This peom is great!  Thanks for sharing!

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2012 at 5:06 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

Thank you! i like your work too!

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 9:12 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I agree with Trace. Its really good.

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 12:34 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank you!!

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 12:34 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank youuu! and yes im very thankful for the people that like my poems:)

on Aug. 28 2012 at 12:29 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

This piece certainly makes use of imagery very well. Nice job.

on Aug. 28 2012 at 12:01 pm
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
1 article 0 photos 273 comments

Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

another wow! I liked this better than best frienc not that I'm saying it wasn't good..but i'm a sucker for this kinda raw emotion. 
Well written..and simply amazing. 
And wow! You say thanks to those who comment on your work that's so thoughtful.. xD

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2012 at 7:48 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank youuuuuu!

on Aug. 19 2012 at 4:33 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

I like the emotion you put into this, good job!

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2012 at 9:51 am
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank youuu! and yes i was angry at a friend when i wrote this!

on Aug. 17 2012 at 9:44 am
AllenStovall PLATINUM, Port Lavaca, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"two things are infinate, the universe and human stupidity, and im still not sure about the universe"
albert einstein

its great! very angry! but great!  

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:21 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank youuu!!!

Hbaff GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:20 pm
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

thank you so much! and yeah i liked that one the best too! 

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:05 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

this is really good!!

Meonly BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 1:26 pm
Meonly BRONZE, Granite Falls, Minnesota
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I really like it. I can relate to it and love the 3rd paragraph down the most!