I hate me

August 13, 2012
By blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the biggest mistake you can make in life is to give up." - Rebekah Hanson
"think outside the shoe." - Jessica Cox
"angel wings break, so fly while you can." - Rose Smith


You said your sorry,
Well it's to late.
It's done now,
But still it's not you I hate.

I hate me,
For not being all you need,
I hate me,
For making you bleed.

You said you'd rather burn,
Well honey it's my turn,
I dream of you every night,
I'm so sorry I couldn't do it right.

I hate me for messing up,
For not filling your cup,
With enough love.

I hate me,
For my looks,
For spending all my time,
In useless books.

I love you,
For your smile,
I love you,
So stay a while.

Your so sweet,
It was destiny that we did meet,
Baby, you're meant for me. 

I love you,
For your brain,
I love you,
You're all that keeps me sane.

I love you,
So please stay,
Because  you're my every thing,
With out you I cannot sing.

Please just stay,
Because I hate me.
You are the only way,
That I am free.

I hate me,
For not being all you need,
I hate me,
For making you bleed.

I love you,
For your smile,
I love you,
So stay a while.

I love you, 
For your style,
I love you,
Because you make me smile.

I love you,
Because you love me too,
Because your love sets me free,
I no longer have to hate me.



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on Oct. 1 2012 at 1:14 pm
blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the biggest mistake you can make in life is to give up." - Rebekah Hanson
"think outside the shoe." - Jessica Cox
"angel wings break, so fly while you can." - Rose Smith

thank you for your comment, and the compliment. i would be more than happy to look at your stuff. :)

on Aug. 14 2012 at 6:47 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
29 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway

This is a beautiful poem! I would appriciate it if you wouldn't mind checking out any of my pieces. I would greatly appriciate any advice you could give. (:


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