I Love You / I Hate You

August 12, 2012
By Fluffles SILVER, Winters, California
Fluffles SILVER, Winters, California
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Favorite Quote:
anything is possible. even slamming a revolving door

I long for the moments when i hear your voice
See your face
Feel like you care

I hate the moments when i feel like a knife is in my heart
When i feel tossed aside
When i feel worthless all over again

Then you pick me up again
And I don't understand it
Resentment and love
Sharing the same space in my heart
And in my mind

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on Aug. 18 2012 at 9:28 am
Mashley310 BRONZE, Rowlett, Texas
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They always forget the last part of that saying: curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back" its something to that effect anyway." - Tamora Pierce

Very relatable! I really liked the rhythm of the first stanza, but I wish there had been a more easily discernable rhythm in the second two. Also, this is just a picky thing, but make sure you capitalize "I". Good work!


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