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I Love You / I Hate You

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I long for the moments when i hear your voice
See your face
Feel like you care

I hate the moments when i feel like a knife is in my heart
When i feel tossed aside
When i feel worthless all over again

Then you pick me up again
And I don't understand it
Resentment and love
Sharing the same space in my heart
And in my mind





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Mashley310 said...
Aug. 18, 2012 at 9:28 am
Very relatable! I really liked the rhythm of the first stanza, but I wish there had been a more easily discernable rhythm in the second two. Also, this is just a picky thing, but make sure you capitalize "I". Good work!
 
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