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They say to listen,
To follow and be quiet,
But I say be free

Break away from the chains that hold you,
The words of criticism and denial,
To a place that says ‘you’

The worlds shadow will lift away from you
You will see new light of ideas
Peace
and Joy

Break Free.



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Dec. 29, 2013 at 9:10 am:
love the message! The first stanza is a different length than the others, but it's still very good and I like how at the end it's a single line that says "break free!"
 
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Roper W. said...
Aug. 12, 2012 at 6:26 pm:
Amazing! 
 
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