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Does she see me?
From all the way over there?
Mental and physical boundaries?

Does she notice me?
I can't stop thinking.
About her and me.

Does she like me?
I don't know,
but I wish I did.

Does she love me?
If only someone could help.
But I don't believe those who do.

Do I like her?
I ask myself all the time.
Do I love her?




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DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 11:08 pm:
They banned me from chat....
 
Johnny99 replied...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 5:16 pm :
lol Fail. Why?
 
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DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:17 pm:
Very good poem, I can really relate to it and I can picture the boy and the girl he thinks he might love. Almost like I've heard about them before... Great job.
 
Johnny99 replied...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:20 pm :
Wouldn't surprise me, we'll all go through it at some point, eh?
 
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xbrit46xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 9:12 pm:
this poem is well written and i really like it!  keep up the good work!(:
 
Johnny99 replied...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 10:12 pm :
Thanks! I will.
 
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