Does She?

August 6, 2012
By Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.


Does she see me?
From all the way over there?
Mental and physical boundaries?

Does she notice me?
I can't stop thinking.
About her and me.

Does she like me?
I don't know,
but I wish I did.

Does she love me?
If only someone could help.
But I don't believe those who do.

Do I like her?
I ask myself all the time.
Do I love her?



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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2012 at 5:16 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

lol Fail. Why?

on Aug. 9 2012 at 11:08 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

They banned me from chat....

Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:20 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

Wouldn't surprise me, we'll all go through it at some point, eh?

on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:17 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Very good poem, I can really relate to it and I can picture the boy and the girl he thinks he might love. Almost like I've heard about them before... Great job.

Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 10:12 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

Thanks! I will.

xbrit46x GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 9:12 pm
xbrit46x GOLD, Whitehall, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People haven't always been there for me but music always has"- Taylor Swift

this poem is well written and i really like it!  keep up the good work!(:




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