Will I

August 2, 2012
The world is spinning, all I see is black and white.
Tears are falling!
Words aren't coming!
I'm struggling to survive!
Cold with fear,
filled with doubt,
falling, falling to the ground.
Will I live?
Will I die?
Will I survive?





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Johnny99 said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:23 pm
I think it's a bad thing my first thought was Katniss.... Oh well, this is a great poem, and it captures all the emotions in such a short time period. Well done.
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:23 pm
What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:23 pm
What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.
 
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