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Few Breaths Left

July 29, 2012
By Cuppie.Cake DIAMOND,
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Favorite Quote:
\"I\'m Not Afraid To Take A Stand, Everybody Come Take My Hand.\"
~Eminem~
\"I Just Want You To Know, That You Deserve The Best, You\'re Beautiful.\"
~Lil\' Wayne~
\"Just keep swimming, just keep swimming. What do we do...we swim swim swim.\"
~Finding No~

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This is so confusing,
I thought everything would be ok,
Never thought they'd both still "love" me,
After everything that's happened,
And they still hang on,
With their last bits of strength,
I wish they knew,
There's only a few breaths left in me.

© Edgard B., Coral Springs, FL

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