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The Good, The Evil

The good, the light
The evil, not bright
The good depletes the confusing haze
The evil lights everything ablaze
The good was in peace
The evil wouldn’t cease
The good got annoyed
The evil made a black void
The good struck back
The evil threw another attack
The good made a heaven of no desire
The evil made a pit of eternal fire
The good will allure
The evil laughs at injure
The good still fights
The evil rules the dark nights.




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Johnny99 said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 11:58 pm:
No problem!
 
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Johnny99 said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 6:24 pm:
Wow, this is really good. Keep up the good work!
 
flywiththebirdsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 10:30 pm :
ty :)                    
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 1:50 pm:
Whoa i love how its a story! really amazing :D (maybe check out my work sometime)
 
flywiththebirdsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 10:30 pm :
that's what I was going for :)
 
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