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My troubled soul

Behind the winning smile on my face, is my inscrutable sadness

his rudeness and impolite stubbornness left me Astonished

his blue eyes had a power to impersonate a serene sky

but , now all i see in them is a strange silence

the exquisite beauty in his words once made me mad about him

but all he speaks now ;are the words of his boastful arrogance

yet! oh ! i seek ; i still seek the love hidden in the depths of his soul

oh! i want to make his dead feelings alive with the afflicted grace of my heart

is he so blind not to see the reality of my love ?

or is he pretending just to leave and walk away ?

Now here i am with my troubled soul

finding a way out of this ; out of this all i am falling ; i am falling deep into this agony

and there's no escape at all ... !




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Binura said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 11:44 am:
This is a pretty good poem! Could make the language a bit more simple since a poem's true feelings doesn't really come from strong words or anything but through the meaning you emphasize.. But still this is nice and I like it.
 
Ren.JThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 11:03 pm :
thank you :D and yes i will work up on that =3
 
Ren.JThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 11:03 pm :
thank you :D and yes i will work up on that =3
 
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