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I fell for you.

I fall in love so fast.
Never knowing if it will last.

Please don't hurt me.
I'm down on the ground can't you see.

I took a chance and fell for you.

My heart is made of glass.
They never seem to last.

I gave you my heart.
Please don't tear it apart.

Now please don't make me wish it I didn't.



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everythingwillbeok_faith said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 5:34 pm
Really good! Loved the rhyming! 
 
DanielM said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 9:57 am
Kiry..... Two words. Great Job. I really like this poem awesome job!!!! I really like the line on how my heart is like glass. Great use of imagery. Suggestion: Use more imagery
 
MorandoTesoro said...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 1:35 pm
I really like this and picture fits nicely with it, but I wish there was something more at the end. But good job! Keep writting!
 
justme242This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 12:10 pm

lovethe rhyming

 

 
xXxXangelXxXx said...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 11:55 am
i thinks its cul how y say that ur heart is made of glass.. that is an awesome metaphor... luved it
 
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