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down-->up (moving on)

July 23, 2012
By Anonymous

when i thought I'm ready to fall in love,

i tried to love again,

i loved the guy who did everything to make me happy.

i loved him and did everything to make him feel it

but i don't know what happened after

'cause he decided to leave me and i feel so stupid every time i remember.

i thought he's the one I've been waiting for so long,

well, those thoughts were just all wrong.

and when he left, i decided to spend one night crying alone.

one night is enough for my stupidity,

to punish my self for thinking that he's the one for me,

to believe that we'll end up loving each other 'till death.

those dreams fell apart,

i never thought we'll gonna reach this part.

'cause everything was perfect until problems hit our path.

i keep on holding on,

and i was trying to be strong,

but one day he just said "you better move on".

i feel so damn nugatory

'cause he became my life for even just a short period of time

and he just left me with this broken heart of mine!.

i did everything to fix it on my own.

i never spent my days just seating at home

and now i congratulate my self for i made it alone.

i thought I'll never be okay again,

'cause all i wanna do before is to cry with the rain.

but now, I'm different

sure thing I'm doing great. ;))


The author's comments:
i wrote this because i got depressed and i just wanna do something that will lessen the pain :)

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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 6:57 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I really like this poem. Great message. Suggestion: why is The format weird