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Anger

Anger why do you take over my body so? Why do you rush my veins and take all sense with it? Why do you make me scream out in frustration?! I am so sick of you! I need to change! Cause I can't change what's making me feel this may...




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Hannabug said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 11:03 pm:
The last word of this poem was supposed to say "way..."
 
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Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 12:57 pm:
I deffinantly get the anger vibe.
 
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dark_stars96 said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:41 pm:
i love this :) <3
 
Hannabug replied...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:51 pm :
Thankyou :)
 
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Silver-wingedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 1:12 pm:
i love the fact that you wrote this when you were angry. You really brought the emotion to this poem. I can relate to what you're saying. Please don't forget to rate and comment on one of my poems.
 
Hannabug replied...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 6:56 pm :
Ok I will be sure to do that :) thx
 
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blue_bunny_femaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 2:44 pm:
keep writing hun cause ur really good dont give up on things you love to do cause one day you might become a writer
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 2:51 pm :
Lol I hope someday I become a published writer but ya never know what will happen :)
 
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BlessingCurses said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 6:57 pm:
Nice! Love the picture. Fits well with this.....Hmmm see what awesome stuff you can come up when your going through the emtions :). Like this,Keep writting!!
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 7:01 pm :
Thankyou!!!
 
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Hbaff said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 8:10 pm:
i really like this Hanna! It reminds me of one of my poems and i can totally feel the rage! good job!
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 8:13 pm :
Thankyou!!!  
 
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chefgirl said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:09 pm:
I love it. But I think the last word is way instead of may. Just checking. I love it. Love the length. Somehow it's a really good format. I like it untraditional. Great job!
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:12 pm :
ya i noticed that after i posted it.. :/
 
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Cocos said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 8:21 pm:
I could feel the anger you realsed in tis poem amd the picture only inhanced your words nice choice.
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:09 pm :
Thankyou!!!!
 
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DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 7:55 pm:
Amazing, I love how you decide to change yourself and leave the things that anger you alone because you know you can't change them. Beautiful poem.
 
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:12 pm :
Thankyou!!!!
 
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Johnny99 said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:18 pm:
A great emotion. I can see the person just screaming all this out. I love the cliff-like ending.
 
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:19 pm :
Thanks :D!
 
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