Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Breathe Breathe By Kiki_McGee, Woodstock, IL More by this author Don't look at me and see. Look at me and breathe -- Every particle of my being. No matter the pain I swirl within; We are one. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Sarah H. said... Aug. 14, 2012 at 9:46 am: Once again, fabulous work. Five stars :) Report abuse Indiewriter said... Aug. 13, 2012 at 10:40 pm: I can relate to this! 5 stars for putting a complicated feeling in a couple lines Report abuse PaigeStreet said... Aug. 9, 2012 at 1:51 pm: Trippy. I could dig this. I had to read it, like five times. Which is a really good sign. Report abuse Ga-GahKayMarie said... Aug. 8, 2012 at 3:47 pm: Short and sweet :) Report abuse TheHangingGirl said... Aug. 3, 2012 at 12:09 pm: Tha was very deep but very short at the same time :) I like it :)
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