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Don't look at me and see.
Look at me and breathe --
Every particle of my being.
No matter the pain
I swirl within;
We are one.



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Sarah H. said...
Aug. 14, 2012 at 9:46 am:
Once again, fabulous work. Five stars :)
 
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Indiewriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 10:40 pm:
I can relate to this! 5 stars for putting a complicated feeling in a couple lines
 
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PaigeStreetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 1:51 pm:
Trippy. I could dig this. I had to read it, like five times. Which is a really good sign. 
 
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Ga-GahKayMarie said...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 3:47 pm:
Short and sweet :)
 
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TheHangingGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 12:09 pm:
Tha was very deep but very short at the same time :) I like it :)
 
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