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Safe Place

July 18, 2012
By LOONI3T00N BRONZE, San Leandro, California
LOONI3T00N BRONZE, San Leandro, California
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The woods are a safe place
and I hunt my emotions
Saving the lives of families
I am quick, lost but strong
I am called
Now I'm weeping from inside,not out
Have to keep my head high
He is called and I know him
He saved a family too
but I owe him... something
Confused by feelings
I hunt to kill
but team up to rebel
Can't change me
Can't change us
Eat the berries of life
Even though we expect death
Holding hands
And the star-crossed lover card is played
When I lay my head
on the chest of a boy who loves me


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by The Hunger Games. I just to know what other people think of my writing.

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Cselig said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 1:09 pm
Really lovely. A nice take on a great story.

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