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The Lake and You

July 13, 2012
By polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
57 articles 20 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels don't even come close to you!"


It shines
The sun rises
It dims
The sun sets
Campfires rising
And soft sonnets
Given by the wind
Whispered through the clouds
Waters murky
Algae, so green
Most things under
Go quite unseen
Splashing and jumping
Wishing and Falling
Into the emotion called love
Yet not quite knowing
What lay ahead
The lake
Oh, it glistens
But it doesn't compare
to the green, green algae
In your beautiful blond hair



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on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:25 am
polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
57 articles 20 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels don't even come close to you!"

Thanks! :D

on Jul. 17 2012 at 4:07 am
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
3 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

You're poem's are really good! I like all of them! :)