Water

July 9, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi


I run and dive into the watery wasteland
I swim and swim till I am in the middle
My arms freeze and my legs stop kicking
I float for a second then I go down
I sink lower and lower
My mind say to move but my body does not obey
The last of my air trickles out
I smile as the black takes me
With a surge of light I am gone
Off into sweet bliss


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was tired so I am sorry if it is not any good.

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on Jan. 18 2013 at 3:42 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)

That last line will be stuck in my head for a while.

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:46 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Unique. I do like this one a lot, actually.

on Jul. 24 2012 at 12:14 pm
Blue..Skies.. SILVER, Lynnwood, Washington
5 articles 10 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original, don't die a copy."

"The best curve on your body is your smile." :)

It goes to show that even when your tired you can still produce such good work. Keep it up! :D

on Jul. 23 2012 at 10:03 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I think this is great, but it's also a bit dark. If you need to talk about anything, I'm here :) Great poem, keep writing

on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:39 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 187 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

This is really good! I love how the body diobeys the mind! Real poetry!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 3:46 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a package that you have to sign for. Yes, it's free. No, there's no guarantee as to what it holds. Open with caution, it's 'FRAGILE'." (I made this up.)

I think you're cool and all, but are you a masochist? Just wondering. Hope not. Don't die! Lol


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