Water

July 9, 2012
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I run and dive into the watery wasteland
I swim and swim till I am in the middle
My arms freeze and my legs stop kicking
I float for a second then I go down
I sink lower and lower
My mind say to move but my body does not obey
The last of my air trickles out
I smile as the black takes me
With a surge of light I am gone
Off into sweet bliss





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SoulPoetry said...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 3:42 pm
That last line will be stuck in my head for a while.
 
TraceS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:46 pm
Unique. I do like this one a lot, actually.
 
Laughing_Panda_Girl said...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 12:14 pm
It goes to show that even when your tired you can still produce such good work. Keep it up! :D
 
hippiechick99 said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 10:03 am
I think this is great, but it's also a bit dark. If you need to talk about anything, I'm here :) Great poem, keep writing
 
albinotiger said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 9:39 am
This is really good! I love how the body diobeys the mind! Real poetry!
 
realbeautifulheart said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 3:46 pm
I think you're cool and all, but are you a masochist? Just wondering. Hope not. Don't die! Lol
 
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